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Fight

Put down your guns.
Put down your swords.
I know what you want.
Just say it with words.

I’ve had enough of this fight,
It goes on and on.
Just call me up
When you’ve decided you’ve won.

What is the point
Of pushing us away
You think you are free
But no, not this way.

And although it hurts
To stick by your side,
That’s what sisters are for.
I’m here for the ride.

You know it’s funny,
I wrote this poem for you.
It’s kind of lame,
But I think it will do.

Comments

  1. UnknownNovember 27, 2017 at 11:27 AM

    Haha I thought this poem was really cute and it had depth at the same time. Well done!

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  2. UnknownNovember 28, 2017 at 12:29 PM

    I love this! It really shows the different facets of relationships within families.

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  3. UnknownNovember 28, 2017 at 11:39 PM

    I love the rhythm and rhyme in your poem! It flows very well. Also, I love the last stanza especially. It really screams 'sibling' to me!

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